J.K. Rowlling's success story

http://history1900s.about.com/od/people/p/jkrowling.htm

I picked up the websites that is about J.K. Rowlling because she is my favorite writer in the world. When I was 12 years old, I watched the movie of Harry Potter. Then I became her big fan. So I wanted to introduce her for you using this nice website.
She is great writer in the world? In my opinion, many people love her story. I will write about her achievements and story of her life.

There was a time when no one knew the name Harry Potter. He is main character of series of Harry Potter. The story of it is about the adventures of this amazing student in Hogwarts school of Witchcraft and Wizard. It is read by many people over the world and translated in many languages. For example, Japanese, English, Thai, Russian, ancient Greek and. I think that it is really rare case to translate in ancient Greek, so it is loved many people.

J.K. Rowling was born in England in 1965. She had been wanted to be a writer from when she was a young. I think she wrote many stories at that time. After she graduated college, she worked many kinds of jobs. But she never gave up her dream which to become a writer. She was working with write some stories to dream some true. One day, she traveled by train to London, she got the idea for the boy wizard. While she was writing the story of Harry Potter, she was married twice and had two child, David Gordon　and Mackenzie Jean. We can understand her enthusiasm to writing from that episode. She continued writing, and finished the first book in the series, Harry Potter and the Philosopher stone in 1997. Then it became an unexpected bestseller. Her life has changed one after another. She has become internationally famous person and according the other information now earns $40 million a year.

I want to be like her to dream come true. In addition, she is a person who I admire in my life. Because she may have been frustrated by many causes. For example, coming to a deadlock for writing, divorce and something. But she never gave up to dream come true. I really admire her about that point. (377 words)

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http://history1900s.about.com/od/people/p/jkrowling.htm
I want to read her other stories which she has written when she was a young. (16 words)

Suggests

I read a lot of suggests of my class mates. In the suggests, I chose some of them.
First, I chose hikaru’s（http://pica-pika.blogspot.com/2009/07/porfolio-for-writting-iii.html ), she said ‘Include introduction and conclusion every time I write essay’ it will help me when I write essay.
Next, I chose Saki’s (http://saki-kiyota.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writingiii.html）, in her blog she said ‘We should include other media and links on our blogs.’ I did that, but it was not enough.
Thirdly, I chose Hikari’s (http://light0121.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writing.html), her suggest was ‘I should use more different words when I write blog.’ That will help me very much, because I can remember many kinds of words of same meaning.
Then, I chose Machiko’s (http://meetmasaigirl.blogspot.com/2009/07/portfolio-for-writing-iii.html) she said ‘I should write more.’ It is really simple suggest, but I think it is most difficult one for us.
Finally, I chose Manami’s (http://panda2215.blogspot.com/search/label/portfolio) she said ‘I should make more comment on my friend's blog, and I also should respond to my friend's comment.’ Of course, I should write blog, but my friend makes comments for my blog, I have to response to them. (180 words)