Thursday, January 14, 2010

BR10:*Poor Old Mum!*


I read 'Poor Old Mum!' The main characters are mum, dad, Wilma and Wilf.

One day, they had a sports festival of their home town. All people were all fired up for the competition, of course Wilma's family, too. They took part in many kinds of competition for example, the long jump, running race, the egg and spoon race and so on. Wilma, Wilf and their dad came good position. Especially, Wilma came first!! Every member of her family was glad about it. Next, it was Mum's turn. She was in a race. At first of the race, she ran the head of all, but unfortunately, she tripped over something and fell on her face. So, she was last in the race. She was really sorry about it to family.

Then, dad put a blindfold on mum and Wilma and Wilf gave new running shoes, a bunch of flowers, message card to mum, and a medal which they made and printed 'BEST MUM'. They had a surprise to encourage her.

Mum was last in the race, but she is the best mum for family. I want to be like her who is loved everyone. I respect her very much!! (199 words)

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