Student ID: 13108148
Portfolio for Writing IV, Section 1A OR 1C
(See: Note 1, below)
(See: Note 1, below)
0.0. OVERVIEW
Reviews, Posts, Words, and More
(See: Note 2, below.)1.0. ESSAYS
(See: Note 3, below.)
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
Please complete this table with data gathered from essays on your blog. See the Key (below) for definitions of the symbols in row one, and complete columns four through nine with numerical values (0, 1, 2, 3, ...).
1.1. Showcase | Short titles with links to blog posts | Dates yyyy.mm.dd | ¶ | W | C | L | P | M |
| 2-01a (2009.10.07) | Essay 1a: Favorite place/ Essay | Wednesday, October 14, 2009 | 340 | 9 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| 2-01b (2009.10.21) | essay2-01b: My favorite place | Thursday, October 22, 2009 | 433 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| (2-01c) | ||||||||
| 2-02a (2009.11.04) | web review | Wednesday, October 28, 2009 | 317 | 2 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| 2-02b (2009.11.18) | J.K. Rowlling's success story | Monday, November 16, 2009 | 377 | 1 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| (2-02c) | ||||||||
| 2-03a (2009.12.02) | essay 2-03a: My language learning history | Wednesday, December 2, 2009 | 527 | 4 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| 2-03b (2009.12.18/22) | Essay 2-03b: My Language History | Thursday, December 17, 2009 | 532 | 0 | 0 | 0 | 0 | |
| (2-03c) | ||||||||
| Totals | --- | --- | 2526 | 18 | 0 | 0 | 0 |
Key:
¶: number of paragraphs five (5) or more sentences in length
W: number of words
C: number of comments
L: number of links
P: number of photos or other graphics
M: number of other media included in post
1.2. Most Improved Essay
(See: Note 4, below.)Selection and Assessment: Which of the three essays that you've written and revised this semester shows the most improvement? What did you do to improve it? Remember that complete answers are better than short answers, focus on your writing (accuracy, appropriacy, content and organization, rather than graphics or other media), and explain at least two major improvements.
- [Please remove these remarks, including the square brackets, then identify your most improved essay, and explain ways that you improved it here.]
2.0. COMMENTS
Showcase | Short titles of posts with links | Dates of comments yyyy.mm.dd | Numbers of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.1. Your first comment on your instructor's blog* | "Social Media and Social Networking Explained" | Wed Oct 14 | 49 | I wrote about good point of SNS and also a point of we have to be careful. |
2.2. Your best comment on a classmate's blog* | Essay (2-03a): Learning languages stories | 12.01.2009 | 12 | Thing that i did not know about her. And I gave her a question. |
2.3. Best comment by a classmate on your blog* | essay 2-03a: My language learning history | Wednesday, December 2, 2009 | 13 | Question |
2.4. Most comments on: | Short titles of posts with link | Dates of posts yyyy.mm.dd | Total number of words in comments | Qualities of comments** |
2.4.1. Any one of your essays* | essay 2-03a: My language learning history | December 9, 2009 | 12 | She gave me a question about which country I want to go when I become a Japanese teacher. |
2.4.1.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | Thursday, December 17, 2009 | --- | --- |
2.4.1.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 231 | I answered each questions each other on my blog post. |
2.4.2. Any of your other posts* | essay2-01b: My favorite place | October 23, 2009 | 19 | Impressions |
2.4.2.1. When did you respond to those comments? | --- | January 14, 2010 | --- | --- |
| 2.4.2.2. How did you respond to those comments? | --- | --- | 20 | I respond her comment in the comment box. |
* Current semester comments on essays and other posts
** Please list the most important qualities of comments on each type of blog post. That is, explain briefly what makes comments good.
2.5. Recent comments display
Does your blog display recent comments from blog visitors in a prominent location, for example, in a sidebar, header, or footer widget? Where, or why not? Please explain.- Yes, it does. I set up my blog display recent comments in top of a sidebar, because that place is the easiest to find the comments from blog visitors when I want to see it.
2.6. Additional reflections on comments
● I have to respond the comments from visiters.
● I should leave more comments than now.
3.0. BOOK REVIEWS
3.1. Showcase | Short titles with links | Dates: yyyy.mm.dd | Words | Comments |
Example: | 2007.05.16 | 39 | 1 | |
BR 2-01 | Monday, September 28, 2009 | 239 | 0 | |
BR 2-02 | Monday, October 5, 2009 | 152 | 2 | |
BR 2-03 | Tuesday, December 22, 2009 | 185 | 1 | |
BR 2-04 | Saturday, January 2, 2010 | 211 | 0 | |
BR 2-05 | Sunday, January 10, 2010 | 211 | 0 | |
BR 2-06 | Tuesday, January 12, 2010 | 319 | 0 | |
BR 2-07 | Tuesday, January 12, 2010 | 239 | 0 | |
BR 2-08 | Tuesday, January 12, 2010 | 137 | 0 | |
BR 2-09 | Tuesday, January 12, 2010 | 137 | 0 | |
BR 2-10 | Thursday, January 14, 2010 | 199 | 0 | |
BR 2-11 | Thursday, January 14, 2010 | 188 | 0 | |
BR 2-12 | Thursday, January 14, 2010 | 147 | 0 | |
BR 2-13 | ||||
BR 2-14 | ||||
BR 2-15 | ||||
BR 2-16 | ||||
BR 2-17 | ||||
BR 2-18 | ||||
--- | --- | Totals: | 2364 | 3 |
Note: Please calculate and list book review Totals for words and comments without including those from the example (above).
3.2. Best Book Review
Selection and Assessment: Which of those book reviews do you feel is the best that you've written this semester, and why? Remember that a complete answer is better than a short answer, focus on your writing, and give at least two reasons to support your assessment.- I think 'BR6:1*I Wish* is the best book review of all because the story is about getting too much freedom. It makes people greedy. In the end, people are disgusted with too much freedom and people want to go back to usual life. I could reconfirm the good point of normal life. In addition, I could write my opinion about freedom and the word count is best of all. So, I select this of all book reviews.
4.0. BLOG LAYOUT, LABELING, LINKING, and MEDIA
Showcase | Yes | No |
| 4.1. Does your blog display an archive? | ○ | |
| 4.1.1. Does the archive display the titles of posts? | ○ | |
| 4.1.2. Is the archive organized by month? | ○ | |
| 4.1.3. Is the archive at or near the top of the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2. Does your blog display a cloud or list of labels in the sidebar? | ○ | |
| 4.2.1. Do your labels include these required labels (typed accurately): | --- | --- |
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| 4.2.2. Does your sidebar display other labels? | ||
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| 4.3. Links and media | --- | --- |
| 4.3.1. Do your blog posts this semester include photos or other graphics? | ○ | |
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| 4.3.2. Does your blog include posts with multiple links? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
| 4.3.3. Does your blog include other media? | ○ | |
| --- | --- |
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4.4. Overall presentation
What have you done to enhance the overall presentation and readability of your blog? List and explain the three most important content, display, formatting, layout, or other presentation changes that you have made on your blog this semester.- I put on some photos on each blogs.
- I changed the layout of my blog. Recent comment moved to the top of the blog.
- I increased links more than last semester.
5.0. ADDITIONAL REFLECTIONS ON YOUR BLOG AND YOUR WRITING FOR IT
Please feel free to include reflections on both class work and homework, as well as on the content of this portfolio (proto-portfolios, showcases, selections, and reflections).- I did all homework.
- I wrote some blog posts with photos.
6.0. ADVICE AND SUGGESTIONS FOR YOURSELF, YOUR PEERS, AND YOUR SUCCESSORS
- I should respond comments from visitors as soon as possible.
- It was really late that beginning my work. So, I have to do it as soon as possible.
- I had to post more blogs.
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Notes:
- This portfolio template derives from Writing Studio Blog templates for Writing IIIc and Writing IVc (2007-08), Writing III, §§1a & 1c, Writing IV: Portfolio, §§1a & 1c (2008-09), and the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III.
- Please use the same code in section 0.0 that you used to embed your proto-portfolios (PPFs) in the footer of your blog, which you should already have revised to display your 2nd (fall) semester PPF first.
- The essays section (1.0. Essays, above) derived from Proto-Portfolio 2-02 (2008).
- The essay selection and explanation item (§1.2, above) differs from that in the July 7, 2009, Portfolio for Writing III. Please read the new item carefully before making a selection.
License:
This portfolio template is licensed under a Creative Commons Attribution-NonCommercial-ShareAlike 3.0 Unported License.
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
Please attribute to "the Writing Studio Blog, 2010.01.05" (with link, but without quotation marks).
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